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Very well made, just a couple things, and I think they're a matter of opinion.
*The effects were nice but I think the flashing was just a little bit overused, kinda made my head hurt and distracted from the fights.
*I'm not sure if the shaking was intended but if it was I think that perhaps a little bit less dramatic on the shaking, for the same reason above, would be nice.
There's my extra two points.
4/5 8/10
Keep em coming.
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This has to be one of the best stick figure animations I have seen in a long time. Xiao Xiao held my interest for quite a while but this, honestly, is an improvement, it's got a bit more humor than Xiao Xiao and some crazy people.
I hope you make more and I hope that they only get better.
You have yourself a fan.
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Too short, nothing really to it to hold any interest, and you didn't even work up to the toilet humor.
Work on those? But I'm giving you a 6 because I laughed . . . Hard.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I was gonna work up the humor. Than I decided not to.
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Definitely the basics of a dress up game, which is good, you're on to something interesting definitely, and I think you should work with it for a while and bring back a more complete product.
First: Look into more options. Weapons from the movies, weapons NOT from the movies. Maybe some new mask ideas and more outfits, stained, regular, torn etc.
Second: Look into making a variable background selections, maybe the lake, another some trees, and a house in another.
Third: Music choices, put in a couple different kinds, for people who don't like the same music. (Maybe even some creepy music from the movie)
That's all I've got, I'm giving you a 4, but I really think you should take it further.
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"I love it, Absolutely amazing potential."
Amazing, absolutely amazing. It's simple and short but at the same time it's so well put to together it just hold my attention. The colors are timed extremely well with the music throughout most of it, I love it, it's like a small flash version of those music machines you see in 3D animation. You could go a lot further with this idea, so I'm going to give you 8. I would suggest taking it a step further, try to make it a bit longer and maybe add a little more of the machine actually MAKING the music.
Author's Response:
you mean animusic by that 3D animations? if you did this animation actually has some influence from those. And what comes about longer one i dont think im going to make longer version of this one but becouse success of this one im going to make "The Machine 2".
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